Haiku III

Rashid Abbasi

November 29, 2015

While I kept waiting,

her ruby lips kissed someone.

Happiness: not mine.

Note:
I feel a freedom from the need of writing anymore when I read this first ever Haiku I wrote in May this year. A super summary of my youth.

Haiku, Sensual

Coldness, Happiness, Introvert, Jealousy, Lips, Ruby, Waiting

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Rashid Abbasi

I have a deep fascination for written words.

26 responses to “Haiku III”

Sumedha.

November 29, 2015 at 6:57 am

I love Haiku!

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izza ifzaal

November 29, 2015 at 7:12 am

Brief & touching

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1. Rashid abbasi
  
  November 29, 2015 at 7:39 am
  
  Thank you izza 🙂 May I know the meaning of your name ?
  
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  1. izza ifzaal
    
    November 29, 2015 at 10:09 am
    
    It’s Arabic and means “to respect” ☺
    
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    1. Rashid abbasi
      
      November 29, 2015 at 10:19 am
      
      Lovely. So with respect, I would like to express that your eyes have added a beautiful mystery to your picture. 😉
      
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      1. izza ifzaal
        
        November 29, 2015 at 2:48 pm
        
        Hahha I am flattered 🙂
        
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itsmeharshi

November 29, 2015 at 7:18 am

Nice Read..😊

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1. Rashid abbasi
  
  November 29, 2015 at 7:41 am
  
  Thanks a lot 🙂
  
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moonskittles

December 5, 2015 at 8:41 pm

So sad… awww..

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1. Rashid abbasi
  
  December 9, 2015 at 6:05 pm
  
  I was waiting for your response. Thanks 🙂
  
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  1. moonskittles
    
    December 9, 2015 at 7:16 pm
    
    🙂 Feel free to tell me when you write your new pieces. 🙂
    
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    1. Rashid abbasi
      
      December 17, 2015 at 6:08 pm
      
      I have shared one called, ‘Man of success.’ Do read when you can.
      
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      1. moonskittles
        
        December 18, 2015 at 3:16 am
        
        It was beautiful!!
        
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Prajakta

December 7, 2015 at 10:59 am

Oh.. this was sad and touching

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1. Rashid abbasi
  
  December 9, 2015 at 6:08 pm
  
  Thanks Prajakta 🙂 May be someday I will get the desired kiss or may be never.
  
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Fun Simplicity

December 15, 2015 at 1:49 pm

Sense of betrayal
Felt from poem above
Beautifully penned 🙂

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1. Rashid abbasi
  
  December 15, 2015 at 2:11 pm
  
  Thank you for reading 🙂
  
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  1. Fun Simplicity
    
    December 16, 2015 at 12:24 am
    
    You are welcome 🙂
    
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Sophia Ball

December 17, 2015 at 4:57 pm

Love this – there’s a true art to using so few words to express so much.

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1. Rashid abbasi
  
  December 18, 2015 at 5:46 am
  
  thank you 🙂
  
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meloheart

December 19, 2015 at 2:36 pm

Explains a lot of deceit

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1. Rashid Abbasi
  
  December 20, 2015 at 9:17 am
  
  thanks for reading Meloheart 🙂
  
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  1. meloheart
    
    December 21, 2015 at 7:37 am
    
    You’re welcome
    
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heila2013

December 27, 2015 at 6:15 pm

I hope your grown-up life is less tragic.
Great writing.
Heila

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1. Rashid Abbasi
  
  December 28, 2015 at 3:09 am
  
  Hello Heila. Thank you for visiting. I hope so. Happy New Year to you:)
  
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  1. heila2013
    
    December 28, 2015 at 4:41 am
    
    Thank you. 😊
    
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