Man of Success

Her last message was not goodbye.
It was like, “you are a nice guy…
but after a certain age,
a woman
can only love
a man of success.”
Next morning he was riding his bike very fast.
Wind with the loud howl was creeping inside
through unbuttoned part of his shirt.
The dark clouds in the horizon were giving a false impression
of a mountain range at the unreachable end.
All of a sudden it was raining.
Rain did not spare any part of his body.
He got himself a cappuccino in a nearby mall.
While supplying warm sips to his solitude,
he was only feeling thankful
that nature
is not
yet
aware
of the fact
that
he
is not
a man

of

success.

~Rashid Abbasi




30 responses to “Man of Success”

  1. Ahhh…deep feelings…..👏👏👏👏

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  2. So beautiful! “While supplying warm sips to his solitude,” is my favorite line!

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    1. Faleminderit Dajena 🙂 ju janë awesome

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      1. 🙂 ahhh, 🙂 je i mirepritur!! 🙂

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  3. “Men of success”, for the most part, have little to offer except money. A wise woman chooses who touches her soul.
    Great poem…very insightful.

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    1. Thank you Mary. Very kind of you to read and respond. I see this world of blogging is full of empathy and I am liking it

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      1. You’re welcome! 🙂
        Yes, the blogging community is supportive…and a great place to discover like-minded friends.

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  4. Oh my goodness. The content is tragic, yes, but you wrote it so beautifully. It’s a curse to write so well that we minimize the pain for the sake of a good piece of writing. God bless you my dear.

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    1. Thank you Leyla for visiting my blog ❤

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  5. Thank you for visiting, liking and following my blog. Sorry for the late reply due to travelling.
    I love poems that relate stories, like yours. It started by making me curious and ended on such a deeply poignant point. Thumbs up!

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  6. Awesome piece. Thank you for sharing and following my blog. Happy New Year and wish you a delightful 2016!

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    1. Thank you 🙂 My best wishes to you also for the New Year!

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    1. Thank you for reading 🙂

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    1. Thanks a lot for reading 🙂

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  7. longing has a satisfaction all it’s own…

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    1. powerful lines indeed 🙂 Thanks for reading and responding. Very kind of you 🙂

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  8. Omg i cry… Because i also got today like kinda day. And i cried alot… But we were have to leave each other..heplless..

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