Your lips

Your lips

A red rose

Soft with dew

As the petals tremble

I am vulnerable

 

I long to feel

The flames

Of their touch

Even if offered

With thorns

Of rejection

 

In those flames

I wish to hide myself

Eventually burn

Myself

 

And disappear

 

Into the world

Of mystical

Ecstasy

~Rashid Abbasi




29 responses to “Your lips”

  1. This was a intriguing imagery ๐Ÿ™‚

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    1. Thanks a lot izza. Very kind of you ๐Ÿ™‚

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      1. ๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š

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  2. Epic…loving your diction

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    1. Thank you george ๐Ÿ™‚

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  3. Bless your vulnerability and pure intuition which alone reveal the secret of Beloved.

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    1. Thank you for reading and for the comment. ๐Ÿ™‚

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  4. Beautiful and sensual, Rashid.

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    1. Thank you for reading ๐Ÿ™‚

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  5. The romance mixed with vibrant colors of sensual lips. A kiss that speaks all the desires. Lovely!
    ๐Ÿ™‚ Happy 2016!

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    1. Thank you very much ๐Ÿ™‚

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      1. ๐Ÿ™‚ You are welcome!

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  6. simple, but elegant..thorns of rejection.. liked your imaginary.

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    1. Thank you Akhila! Very kind of you ๐Ÿ™‚

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      1. welcome Rashid.. Happy New year with more and more roses ๐Ÿ˜‰

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        1. Same to you. I am still waiting for those moments ;). I hope 2016 will be better. I wish you find success and happiness this year.

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          1. he he he…Thank you.. Roses and thorns are a part of the life..So I welcome 2016 with more and more roses and thorns..

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  7. Very toucing .

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      1. Welcome , man

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      2. Yes why u do . Tell me

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    1. Thanks Leyla! ๐Ÿ™‚ I think comparing to lips to roses is underestimating the beauty of muse, no ? ๐Ÿ˜‰

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      1. ๐Ÿ™‚ ohh thanks Rashid Abbasi

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