Haiku IV

She left, unaware

that her fragrance created

a choir in Β my mind




30 responses to “Haiku IV”

  1. hooklineandinkwell Avatar
    hooklineandinkwell

    wow…what beautiful figurative language…those last two lines are just amazing

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    1. Thank you FT. You are very kind. You know how to make people feel better through words ❀

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        hooklineandinkwell

        You are welcome, Rashid…I just express what I feel, my friend πŸ™‚

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  2. Brevity at its best!
    A mesmerizing piece!

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    1. Thank you Jyoti. Very kind of you ❀

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      1. You are welcome. πŸ™‚

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  3. How gorgeous- wow! Love

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    1. thank you πŸ™‚ very kind of you! I was having a bad day. And your comment has lighten up my mood a little

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      1. Aww yay! That makes me happy to hear. I hate bad days. You’re amazing, remember that and believe it. Let the truth shine on your heart. β˜€οΈβ€οΈ

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  4. Satavisha Ghorui Avatar
    Satavisha Ghorui

    I hereby nominate your Blog for the award. πŸ˜ƒ Keep blogging!

    http://wp.me/p70G7e-3C

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    1. Thanks a lot Satavisha πŸ™‚ Very kind of you

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      1. Satavisha Ghorui Avatar
        Satavisha Ghorui

        It’s your talent. 😊

        I just appreciated it.

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  5. Wow. Wow. You have a deep gift. Keep digging. Blessings!

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    1. Thank you Dana! πŸ™‚

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  6. Nice.

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  7. Where are u from

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      1. Hahaha indian indian indiaannn

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        1. I look like an Indian too, no? πŸ˜›

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        2. You are welcome to my city and be my guest any time πŸ™‚

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      2. Nice. İ love asian people😊

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        1. Good to know that πŸ™‚

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    1. thanks a lot πŸ™‚ I will read your blog soon

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      1. welcome Rashid πŸ™‚

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  8. This is really, really beautiful! And, I like the subtlety in your pieces. Keep up the good work Rashid! πŸ™‚

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    1. thank you for
      encouragement Hardeep πŸ™‚

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      1. You deserve all the praise for your writings. Keep up the good work Rashid. πŸ™‚

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        1. Very kind of you πŸ™‚

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